Friday, April 29, 2011

Campus Life Third-Person Paragraph

She gets ready by waking up at 7:00 a clock in the morning. She does her hair at 7:30 and brushes her teeth. She eats at 8:00 and she leaves at 8:10 because if she doesn't leave on time she will get on restriction. The staff starts to cook at 5:00 by 5:30 the staff had finished with the cooking. At 5:30 the staff goes to wherever you are at and says it's dinner time. The kids all sit down and have a peaceful dinner sometimes the kids are kinda hyper so they have fun. Lunch at the cafe is really loud because students are yelling at each other and having fun. Sometimes students get a little bit to happy and want to fight each other but it's not all the time.

4 comments:

  1. Good job best friend, keep up the good work

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  2. Nice job housemate, you do great posts!

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  3. I'm very proud of your posts lately, your doing great just work on your wording alittle bit more.

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  4. Bleep! Bleep! "You" alert! You only slipped once. Keep working to write in third-person.

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