Common and Proper Nouns Tourist Paragraph

People like to travel to cities because they may want a new adventure or they are just retired and want to spend their retirement somewhere they have been wanting to spend are there life.
One of the city tourist like to visit is New York. People like going there because it's a great place to go and there are a lot of stores and places where tourist like to visit before they leave.
Another City tourist like to visit is San Diego. People like going to San Diego if they are out of state because San Diego is a nice place to visit for a while but it is not a good place to live in because of some of the problems there are.
A City they also like to visit is Orlando because of all the great stores they have. People go there because it is very sunny and is a calm enviroment for a person that is trying to go there for vacation
What all of these cities have in common are that they are all sunny and they are all calm. All of these cities have great stores to shop in.